Jake
Idea for a zombie movie PART ONE
I have been think of ideas for a zombie movie and i have only come up with one
Alright it starts out with a young cople maybe 15-16 years old and they talk about never leaveing each other and the boyfriend says he would never leave her.
skip to 10 years later
they are engaged and looking 4 a new house to move in 2 together they turn on the radio and it talks about a new disease that seems 2 drive people insane and attack people. they talk about it and wonder wtf is with that disease and if it has a cure. after looking a finding the perfect house the bride 2 be(im calling sally) says tells her fiance (im calling noah) she is pregnant. noah is overjoyed by the news he drops sally off at her house and noah drives back to his house on his way back he sees a man lying has down in the road he pulls over and calls 911. after he can't get through he takes a flash light out of the glove box and walks over 2 the person lying down in the middle of the street. the person is coverd in blood noah checks to see if he is still alive. after checking for a pluse and not finding one he drags the body off the road and is on his way home on his way home he truck runs out of gas so he decides 2 lock his car and walk the rest of the way home. when he gets home he turns the tv on and gets something to eat by the time he finaly gets to relax the tv cuts to a news break he starts screaming at the tv saying he doesn't give a shit about the news. the news anchor says that their is civil disobedience breaking out all over the city. he calls sally and gets the answering machine he starts screaming again the looks back at the tv as he gets attacked by people and seems to being eaten he calls sally back and gets the answering machine again. the he hears something break and goes to investigate he takes a flashlight with him and looks around his house for broken glass he finds he bedroom window broke on the floor again he starts screaming.he goes over to the window and finds blood on the window sil he turns and someone grabs him and tries biting him he takes the flashlight and starts beating the person over the head after the person seems to be dead he calls sally again and again gets the answering machine. he desides to check on sally. he grabs a clever and a hunting rifle from his shed and begins walking over to sally. along the way he goes through a small town and finds it desertedhe finds a running car and decides to take it. after traveling for a little while he finds a teenaged boy coverd in blood with a baseball bat the boy waves him down and asked if he knew what was going on noah says no he doesnt and offers him to go with him to find sally. the teenager agrees and says his name is matt. on the way they run into a road block they decide 2 go on foot. on the way a grop of people spot them and they get chased by them, noah soon turns and starts shooting at them. matt then finds a police car and starts shearching for a gun he finds a pistol and starts shooting at the hord of people...
sorry about misspelling words
Answer
Suggestions for your original idea:
Some things are just too cliche, you know? For example:
Beginning with love scene. Try beginning with a scene of a big city, a helicoppter view moving across the city, and insert random 3-second scenes of the people in the city doing their everyday things. For example, while the view is over the city, show a clip of people in the supermarket buying stuff. Basically, you want to show the city is crowded and can easily be attacked. Then, get into the story about Noah and Sally.
A "VIRUS"... wow I mean isn't that just in everything? Try this: plague is reported in China that appears in rice crops, and governments in China aren't managing well. The plague at first kills a village in some farmland, and then starts spreading. The plague kills turns people bloodthirsty, hungry for food, anything they could find, and the plague spreads among people too. It dosen't slow people down like zombies.
Some awkward things with the story:
The part with Noah driving on the road and seeing a dead person. Why would he drag the person off the road when he is covered in blood? A normal person would just leave it alone.
The part where Noah runs out of gas after that: a normal person would call AAA for gas services, not leave their car! If an audience sees this, he wouldn't be convinced. It's just too unreasonable. Just take out the "out-of-gas" scenario.
And the parts where he is in the house-too awkward. He takes a flashlight? Why? He could just turn on a lightswitch eh? So, make his power go out, and he calls Sally via cellphone. This is the rising action, it has to make sense. But still make him fight the zombie dude.
And, so make Noah drive to Sally's house, there is no need for the "stop-at-abandoned town" thing. I mean, why wasn't he there before when he drove back at the begining?
Here's an idea at some continuation:
So they gather up some weapons from the police car and go on foot. The zombies chase them, as you said, and they start shooting. They kill the guys, and start running. They get to Sally's house, only to find that Sally is on the floor bleeding from a neck wound and covered in blood. The windows are broken, table turned over, blood everywhere. Sally groans and begins to get up with a dead look in her eyes. Crying to himself, Noah puts a bullet in her head. Noah and Matt talk, Matt tells him to pull it together, and that they should set up a safe house. They decide to try to raid a nearby city to gather supplies. Mean while, the military in quarantining the
city, and Matt and Noah hide in a garage shed.
I'm out of ideas for now, but make the ending spectacular, like Matt and Noah find survivors and a find a police armory and a TANK and Helicopter and lots of guns and justs F-ing clears out the city.
Suggestions for your original idea:
Some things are just too cliche, you know? For example:
Beginning with love scene. Try beginning with a scene of a big city, a helicoppter view moving across the city, and insert random 3-second scenes of the people in the city doing their everyday things. For example, while the view is over the city, show a clip of people in the supermarket buying stuff. Basically, you want to show the city is crowded and can easily be attacked. Then, get into the story about Noah and Sally.
A "VIRUS"... wow I mean isn't that just in everything? Try this: plague is reported in China that appears in rice crops, and governments in China aren't managing well. The plague at first kills a village in some farmland, and then starts spreading. The plague kills turns people bloodthirsty, hungry for food, anything they could find, and the plague spreads among people too. It dosen't slow people down like zombies.
Some awkward things with the story:
The part with Noah driving on the road and seeing a dead person. Why would he drag the person off the road when he is covered in blood? A normal person would just leave it alone.
The part where Noah runs out of gas after that: a normal person would call AAA for gas services, not leave their car! If an audience sees this, he wouldn't be convinced. It's just too unreasonable. Just take out the "out-of-gas" scenario.
And the parts where he is in the house-too awkward. He takes a flashlight? Why? He could just turn on a lightswitch eh? So, make his power go out, and he calls Sally via cellphone. This is the rising action, it has to make sense. But still make him fight the zombie dude.
And, so make Noah drive to Sally's house, there is no need for the "stop-at-abandoned town" thing. I mean, why wasn't he there before when he drove back at the begining?
Here's an idea at some continuation:
So they gather up some weapons from the police car and go on foot. The zombies chase them, as you said, and they start shooting. They kill the guys, and start running. They get to Sally's house, only to find that Sally is on the floor bleeding from a neck wound and covered in blood. The windows are broken, table turned over, blood everywhere. Sally groans and begins to get up with a dead look in her eyes. Crying to himself, Noah puts a bullet in her head. Noah and Matt talk, Matt tells him to pull it together, and that they should set up a safe house. They decide to try to raid a nearby city to gather supplies. Mean while, the military in quarantining the
city, and Matt and Noah hide in a garage shed.
I'm out of ideas for now, but make the ending spectacular, like Matt and Noah find survivors and a find a police armory and a TANK and Helicopter and lots of guns and justs F-ing clears out the city.
Zombies attack! They surround your house...?
Sammie
Your only weapons are:
a pickachu stuffed animal
a cotton-ball
a chocolate marsh-mellow
and a pillow.
What do you do?
Answer
This one took me a minute to plan.. but I think I've got something here!
So...
1. I would use my insanely mad electronic skills and set the PIKACHU to detonate (the one I own has light up cheeks and says "pika pika!" so there's got to be some wiring in there..).
2. I would then throw it out a window (my second storey bedroom window to be exact).
3. I'd then stuff the COTTON BALL in my ears, ripping it apart into two pieces of course.
4. I'd then brace myself for the explosion and shove the CHOCOLATE MARSHMALLOW into my mouth, knowing that if my plan failed it may be the last thing I ever eat.
5. After the pika-bomb went off, killing all of the zombies (maybe even the last of them, I could be the savior of mankind!) I would place my PILLOW under my head and nap.
This one took me a minute to plan.. but I think I've got something here!
So...
1. I would use my insanely mad electronic skills and set the PIKACHU to detonate (the one I own has light up cheeks and says "pika pika!" so there's got to be some wiring in there..).
2. I would then throw it out a window (my second storey bedroom window to be exact).
3. I'd then stuff the COTTON BALL in my ears, ripping it apart into two pieces of course.
4. I'd then brace myself for the explosion and shove the CHOCOLATE MARSHMALLOW into my mouth, knowing that if my plan failed it may be the last thing I ever eat.
5. After the pika-bomb went off, killing all of the zombies (maybe even the last of them, I could be the savior of mankind!) I would place my PILLOW under my head and nap.
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